You Punctuate My Day


Submitted by BruceW
March 21, 2012 - 1 year 9 weeks ago

A simple poem about a simple love.

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You Punctuate My Day

Your morning cuddle keeps the cold at bay

Your parting kiss sustains me through the day

Your welcome home eases a troubled mind

Without you I would be lost and blind

In short, I can say without pretence

You punctuate my day and give it sense

 

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Author's note #1: another romantic poem by the same author: Everything is You

Author's note #2: this poem was previously published by me on Authspot, here
 


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Comments

jane789's picture
jane789

Thank you for sharing. I'm trying to come up with some of my own poems but I'm struggling. Do you have any advice?

Submitted by jane789 on Thu, 07/19/2012 - 19:45.
Tulan's picture
Tulan

Very, very nice, loved it.

Submitted by Tulan on Wed, 07/18/2012 - 06:04.
avissado's picture
avissado

you are quite the romantic bruce..

Submitted by avissado on Wed, 07/18/2012 - 01:18.
rubyhawk's picture
rubyhawk

Beautiful sentiment, Bruce.

Submitted by rubyhawk on Mon, 07/16/2012 - 07:50.
BruceW's picture
BruceW

Thank you very much, Rubyhawk!

Submitted by BruceW on Sun, 11/11/2012 - 23:33.
icananswer's picture
icananswer

Nice poem.

Submitted by icananswer on Sun, 07/15/2012 - 23:02.
lrdl3535's picture
lrdl3535

Great, thanks for sharing

Submitted by lrdl3535 on Fri, 07/13/2012 - 20:32.
1hopefulman's picture
1hopefulman

Very nice! Love and life doesn't have to be complicated. We can compare it to water. Just two different elements and look how much it contributes to life.

Submitted by 1hopefulman on Wed, 05/30/2012 - 16:53.
phoenix35's picture
phoenix35

Cute, sweet lines.

Submitted by phoenix35 on Thu, 03/22/2012 - 15:01.
shelpeare's picture
shelpeare

Nice rhymes. Your choice of punctuation was "on spot." :)

Submitted by shelpeare on Tue, 05/29/2012 - 04:18.